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the oak and flower

Posted 17th March 2009 at 02:18 PM by bluerayarchangel

The large oak bend down and whispered in my ear, get out quick, because a hurricane is coming,

I looked up and said
but I can't, why should I go?
I like it here, now

You must leave or you die
said the oak, sad and so worried
you must leave now please

I looked up and again
said but I can't, see me here
I am only little flower

Then you will die today
said the oak, who started to cry
maybe I will join you

No no don't think that
I said sad and full of tears
We may both survive for years


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    Neatly done, simple and evocative. I liked it.
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    Posted 17th March 2009 at 05:12 PM by Saeltari Saeltari is offline
 

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