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Old 10th December 2007, 10:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
Damiynn
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Re: Chapter 2 2nd book, Looking for mistakes, or weak parts

Thanks everyone, I understand what you're talking about and you're right, I might have been trying a little too hard to make it sort of easy to follow if you haven't read the first book, guess I should change some of that. I left most of it out in the rest, but wasn't sure how much to exclude in the first two chapters,, thanks again
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