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Old 18th March 2006, 11:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I have a Project Going....

I am working on a novel series with my friend. It is called, "Gifted Class." If someone wants a synopsis or something... please respond ^-^
Yeah, I'm really trying to advertise this thing -_-;;;
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Old 18th March 2006, 11:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: I have a Project Going....

Why don't you post some of it for critiquing. The feedback can be really helpful.
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Re: I have a Project Going....

Weel, I would definitely try...the main problem is that I have a co-author, so I would have to run my excerpts past her to see if they would work. Here's a passage from the thirteenth book in the series that I've been working on, though.

"The Professor's new companion scared Jessica in a way she had never imagined. That face was so familiar, she just knew that it was him. And then there were the eyes. Oh yes, they were his eyes, filled with the same loathing from her chidhood. But now, they also contained grief, and, was that guilt? No it couldn't be. She held her arms protectively around her, as if shielding herself from his eyes. She looked at her arms, at her purple, raw skin. Her corpse-like appearance had, after all, been part of the hatred that he felt for her, though her mother's unfortunate passing had been the final straw...
'Jess? Jess is somehting wrong?' James stepped into her field of vision, his eyes filled with worry. He was so protective of her that it almost made her want to laugh.
'No, I'm fine,' she said quickly, trying to hide all of what she had been feeling. Until this point, the school campus had shielded her from the outside world and its cruelties, but just that face...Well, she thought quickly, I must only have been imaging it. And, indeed, the man by Professor Yelrp's side was gone."

Err....yeah. That's what I have....but it was a little bit of a spoiler, from Gifted Class 13 "Painful Reminder." It doesn't make sense now, but once it's in the series and more is revealed about each individual character, it will make a lot of sense.
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