Hi Lyrebird, some good stuff here. It has an easy and relaxed pace.
My only problem is...
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Originally Posted by Lyrebyrd  Sometimes the difference between a gift and a curse isn’t all that different. |
Having "difference" and "different" so close seems to jar with me. If you have another way of saying it that doesn't spoil the flow of what went before?
I'd give some examples but I'm posting from work and really should get back to it...
