| Re: Question re copyrights and stuff
hmm
as I say he is only one of several readers. He hasn't been overlly fond of any one part as such, and there haven't been major changes, at least structurally. He's certainly never recommended *put this in here* or any such, just a general why this part isn't so good, or that part is. ( ie - chapter two is slow, need to tighten that up and take out the exposition that snuck in there while I wasn't looking) He comes across as just eager to know what happens at the end tbh. |