27th September 2007, 09:09 PM
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| Re: Exposition & Info-Dumps vs. Local Colour Sursum corda! Up with the hearts! I'm not saying this because I think you are a earthworm (those have nine hearts), but because, as writers, we are all in the same situation. Sometimes we are happy with ourselves, sometimes we are under the water. So, to make things better, I worked a little on your latest excerpt. No, it was not to exerce my wickedness (I am all heart, not at all what they say, the bane of the board, the one who scares off the regulars. Lies, blatant, heartless lies ). I hope it'll help a little . So, please, don't lose heart! |
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