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svalbard · 25th August 2007, 12:10 AM

Hi Fungunner,

I enjoyed the first part. I am a sucker for action sequences and I think you described it quite well. The second part left me a bit confused. Maybe you can interlink it a bit better with the opening sequence. Overall not bad though.

25th August 2007, 12:10 AM	#4 (permalink)
svalbard Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 311	Re: Shot at a prologue... Hi Fungunner, I enjoyed the first part. I am a sucker for action sequences and I think you described it quite well. The second part left me a bit confused. Maybe you can interlink it a bit better with the opening sequence. Overall not bad though.