Thread: Back-side blurb
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Old 23rd August 2007, 01:03 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Back-side blurb

It sounds interesting, though I agree on the names. They'd put me off, but I'm notoriously choosy about such things. I assume you don't mean underground war as in a war that takes place under the ground - as Memnoch seems to be saying - but rather one that has been secret and hidden for a long time? Only other point would be shadows-shadowy repetition in the final paragraph.
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