Thread: Back-side blurb
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Old 23rd August 2007, 12:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
Rider
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Re: Back-side blurb

Yeah, that's quite a few 'so's...

I'd agree about the loyalties. You should have the reader take what he can of the character later on in the book not tell them who he is and what he does.
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