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Kromaethius · 2nd August 2007, 08:49 PM

First off, get your laptop fixed or plug in a usb keyboard!

Okay that said, I will say it takes some 'nads' if you can excuse my boldness in setting your craft for others to view and to comment on -- Kudos!

Okay with the grammatics and the spelling aside, you have talent Josephine and you keep at it. I enjoyed the dialogue the best.

I believe IMHO you are on the right track. I would like to read your work after it's been properly edited.

Thank you for sharing your soul with us.

2nd August 2007, 08:49 PM	#10 (permalink)
Kromaethius Author of the Chronicles Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: South Dakota Posts: 7	Re: Darkness creeps into the light... First off, get your laptop fixed or plug in a usb keyboard! Okay that said, I will say it takes some 'nads' if you can excuse my boldness in setting your craft for others to view and to comment on -- Kudos! Okay with the grammatics and the spelling aside, you have talent Josephine and you keep at it. I enjoyed the dialogue the best. I believe IMHO you are on the right track. I would like to read your work after it's been properly edited. Thank you for sharing your soul with us.