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Nesacat · 1st August 2007, 11:29 AM

.... and what happens next. The grammar and typos aside I liked it.

Josephine still needs some fleshing out and there is may be no need for the other girl child.

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Nesacat The Cat Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 2,685	Re: Darkness creeps into the light... .... and what happens next. The grammar and typos aside I liked it. Josephine still needs some fleshing out and there is may be no need for the other girl child.