-Ignore the titles of my threads. They have no relevance.
- Don't concern yourself with my poor grammar or spelling etc etc. Though I am interested in the prose to an extent. Does the tone work etc.
- Please make allowances for the fact that I wrote about 4000 words today whilst on the telephone at work and during my lunch. This is my scrawlings in their roughest form. Assume that I know how to write (
).
- I had hoped to get this chapter finished today but alas I fell short by about 1000 words.
-This continues on from the last extract I posted and makes what could be the first chapter in my new project.
http://www.chronicles-network.com/fo...hing-dark.html
Enjoy!
PS the letter Q does not work on my laptop after I spilled tea on it.
PPS I am going to bed, having just scanned through it. So many typos and spelling errors. Such poor sticky prose.... ahh i shall clean this up tomorrow or never.