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Old 24th July 2007, 10:14 PM   #15 (permalink)
Lacedaemonian
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Re: Something Dark...........

Thanks for reading it mate. Josephine was very rushed, her opening scenes are of little to no significance and are simply a ploy to break up the Stone scenes. She will be more important later. For the time being I simply wanted to slap her into the story and develop her character later. Her scenes are dull and 'wooden' as many of you have rightly said.
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