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vintagefury · 17th July 2007, 07:20 AM

Russian, you say? I'm guessing your grammatical structure must be very similar to Polish. My parents are Polish, and a lot of the grammar mistakes that you made are similar to ones they make to this day - and they have been living in America for 25 years.

What I mean to say is, excellent job translating. There are definately errors there, Chris called them out, and you should take him up on his offer to help. I enjoyed reading this for the concept and would be very pleased if you were to put this out there in English, as it's a very interesting read. A little prose-heavy for my taste, but that's not a flaw, merely a personal preference.

17th July 2007, 07:20 AM	#3 (permalink)
vintagefury no longer WoW-addicted Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: California Posts: 56	Re: The Fourth Reading (first 2 ch) Russian, you say? I'm guessing your grammatical structure must be very similar to Polish. My parents are Polish, and a lot of the grammar mistakes that you made are similar to ones they make to this day - and they have been living in America for 25 years. What I mean to say is, excellent job translating. There are definately errors there, Chris called them out, and you should take him up on his offer to help. I enjoyed reading this for the concept and would be very pleased if you were to put this out there in English, as it's a very interesting read. A little prose-heavy for my taste, but that's not a flaw, merely a personal preference.