| Re: The Fourth Reading (first 2 ch)
Noticable shortage of articles particularly definite (the) Several pluperfects missing. I can go through and do a line edit if you would like, but since you marked that you knew the text needed corrections… no perhaps you would loke some of the corrections specified.
On the other hnd, there are some very interesting concepts. The idea of a "half life" for a reflex (the length of time in which the number of times you perform the now unnecessary action drops by a half) is glorious; I wonder how many readers will understand it?
Yes, the translation still needs some work, and if it'll help I'll point out grammatical and punctuation errors; but concepts that deserve that work. |