Hi Troshe, nice piece, had me hooked from the fourth sentence.
The style was good for me and easy reading - just what I like. A couple of contradictions though, seeing as you've asked for comment, but they didn't leap out at me while I was reading - only afterwards...
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“All around this room, take in the light and shadows. With all of your senses awake the shadows will deepen and light will shine brighter.
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The room was darker somehow, almost blurred. Everything else in the room was insignificant and dull. The table and chairs were there but seemed somehow pale and cold.
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What happened to the light shining brighter?
Also, Lendoren never answered the question about which stone had a spell cast on it. And, from the description, all the stones glowed, not just one.