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Commonmind · 21st February 2007, 08:19 PM

At more than 4500 words this is way too lengthy for a worthwhile critique. Try breaking it up a bit, if possible.

21st February 2007, 08:19 PM	#3 (permalink)
Commonmind Registered Lurker Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,281	Re: Another Crucible chapter... At more than 4500 words this is way too lengthy for a worthwhile critique. Try breaking it up a bit, if possible.