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Originally Posted by panzerman  I thought that may be the case. Starting with a scene sounds great, but could there be a starting paragraph to give a brief 'intro' into why the council is meeting? I cant make myself happy with this chapter, I dont know why, it just doesnt 'do it' for me. |
Only if it's brief, otherwise you risk losing your readers early on. And, if you're going to do it, do it through the thought process of one of the characters.