[panzerman]

I thought that may be the case. Starting with a scene sounds great, but could there be a starting paragraph to give a brief 'intro' into why the council is meeting? I cant make myself happy with this chapter, I dont know why, it just doesnt 'do it' for me.

Also, I just noticed I posted an older version. The punctuation errors and the one incomplete sentence have already been fixed. I am very sorry for not paying more attention to this!!!!! Ill try to edit.