View Single Post
Old 11th February 2007, 04:07 AM   #3 (permalink)
MButcher
Registered User
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 25
Re: Beginning of "The Brother's Choice" 1400 words

Wow that was fast. Thank you for that, I'll rewrite some of those parts to make it clearer. Anything else?
MButcher is offline   Reply With Quote