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Culhwch · 10th February 2007, 01:16 PM

Oooh, bold! Thanks, Pyan. Glad you liked. I'll post more of this scene in the next day or two...

And yes, I was. Worse, probably. In my head I still am...

EDIT: And thanks mosaix, too. You're right. I'd already cut a few of those out just before I posted. This is about second draft stage, third at best, so there's still refinement to happen.

10th February 2007, 01:16 PM	#4 (permalink)
Culhwch Lost Boy Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 3,304	Re: Another short excerpt... Oooh, bold! Thanks, Pyan. Glad you liked. I'll post more of this scene in the next day or two... And yes, I was. Worse, probably. In my head I still am... EDIT: And thanks mosaix, too. You're right. I'd already cut a few of those out just before I posted. This is about second draft stage, third at best, so there's still refinement to happen.