[The Technophobe]

The Technophobe wanders in, has a look around, sits down and pulls a ginger snap from his pocket. Looks at the ginger snap and takes a bite. Chews slowly, then says " Well done for having the ambition to write, you have already shown wisdom by asking for advice (especially intelligent as well, as there is no better place to recieve it than here). Are you trying to convey a sense of Joseph being alone? As this was my first impression or just trying show Joseph's isolation? Any way keep at it as there will be plenty of advice coming your way" Tech then stands up, looks around for Hoopy, who is nowhere in sight, takes a rope from out of his pocket and proceeds to climb the rope, at the top of the rope promptly disappears