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dwndrgn · 18th February 2005, 03:42 AM

I agree that the sea serpents portions of Liveship are rather annoying - but they provide some important info that is related to the rest of the story. I felt she probably could have shortened it a great deal and still given enough of the info without going into such detail.

I also got the feeling (and this could be completely wrong) that at some point she would tell the story of how the 'lost civilization' (trying not to give any spoilers) got that way. Maybe she plans to revisit that later or just to leave it for our own imaginations. Who knows.

18th February 2005, 03:42 AM	#23 (permalink)
dwndrgn Fierce Vowelless One Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 3,660	Re: Live Ship Traders I agree that the sea serpents portions of Liveship are rather annoying - but they provide some important info that is related to the rest of the story. I felt she probably could have shortened it a great deal and still given enough of the info without going into such detail. I also got the feeling (and this could be completely wrong) that at some point she would tell the story of how the 'lost civilization' (trying not to give any spoilers) got that way. Maybe she plans to revisit that later or just to leave it for our own imaginations. Who knows.