Thread: 7.05: Revisions
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Old 28th October 2003, 02:30 AM   #27 (permalink)
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Originally posted by skydiver
...the basis of the story wsn't too bad, but it desperately needed a b plot to add some drama or action to it
Not trying to be too snarky, but it could have used a solid A plot too...

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