Thanks for reading it.
Not my best fan fic, but I'm happy with how it turned out. Part Two is still being written, but it is already a hell of a lot better than this one.
Gardner's rank? Well, that was something I didn't put too much thought too. My bad
Also,
Victory episode 4 is up on this site. It is the best episode to date, and I'm hoping i could get some detailed feedback on it...