| Over the past month or so I've been, after careful consideration, expanding the DOAAD to include more detail and character development, meaning it has gone from one hundred pages to two hundred. 95% of what was there before is still there, and by that I mean the entire story is still the same, but errors have been corrected and badly written sections have been rewritten. A few new bits have been added here and there, and if I get it published it will be the new version. |