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Not read it properly yet (do that in the bath later) and obviously I don't know what you have planned for the next episode. But after a quick browse I wonder if you would permit me one observation?
If you lose, or modify, the prologue a little. You would have an entirely original fiction, that is unrestrained by the limitations of Star Trek. It does not need it and it will be better for it.
There is a section in General Discussions for Original Fiction
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