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| Registered User | Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. I thought I'd describe some of the technologies I'm working on for my book and see if anybody had a reaction, and it made sense. Awhile back, a guy called Bill Stone talked about making a trip from the Earth to the Shackleton Crater on the moon. A lot of people feel strongly based on the latest data that there is a massive source of water reachable from the crater, which probably got there as a result of millenia of asteroids slamming into the crater and leaving the reservoir there below. Stone himself talked about how Cortez burned his ships when he reached the new world, saying that a trip to the crater would be a lot like that. He wouldn't be able to carry enough fuel to get home, so once he reached his destination he would have to successfully mine the crater for fuel. He could split the ice into it's component parts, hydogen and oxygen, and use the hydrogen for rocket propellant. And once he did that he could supply spaceships on the moon with fuel from the moon, which means they wouldn't have to carry all their fuel with them. The book I'm working on takes place in the near future, where we've gone to the crater and started to do something a lot like that. We are attempting to go to Mars and make changes in it's environment to terraform it. There is a major space station, and a base within the Shackleton crater, for resource gathering. From there, they will mine asteroids and different locations around the system. I don't have what I refer to as blatantly "magical" technologies in the book, because it takes away from the message. In order to make this work, they recycle everything. They grow food in space, recycle their air, oxygen, and wastes, and mine resources in space. As soon as they could, they made a shipyard in orbit and used materials out there to make the ships, rather than lifting it into orbit, and some of the resources are then dropped from orbit and sold for a profit. So no food replicators, no transporters, and realistic space flight. I do have one particular technology that looks strange, and I refer to them as the clean tubes. The clean tubes are a bit like a way to put people in stasis, but it's not based on energy or freezing people. Essentially, when they were trying to figure out a way to deal with cancerous tumors, they decided to put people in a tube they filled with oxygenated liquid, liquid which they can breathe in. They can then feed them different nutrients and drain the same out of the tube selectively, and put the person into a kind of sleep. Some might assume the 'clean' tube thing is sarcastic because it's pretty messy, but the idea is that they've finally created a clean room. One analogy that people use in scientific experiments is that when you conduct an experiment, you have to do it in a clean room, keeping track of everything that changes when someone is being tested for disease. You have to keep track of the temperature they are in, what they eat, what they breathe, and so on, and it's very hard to keep track of every variable. But when someone is asleep in this tube, you are keeping track of every minute detail. You can give them exactly what nutrients you like, and test what they do over a period of weeks. Meanwhile, any wastes which leave their body can be filtered out and tested, and sensors are tracking every detail of what goes on in their body. After perfecting the process, the people who did this realized that they were speeding up the body's regeneration processes, and in many ways people who came out of the tube seemed healthier and theoretically younger than when they went in the tube. Eventually, they decided to put these tubes on spaceships, and put people in stasis while they traveled for many long months across the solar system. They don't need to go as fast which conserves fuel. Since their metabolism is slowed down, they consume much less oxygen and food while in the tubes, and they can live for the long periods of time necessary for long distance travel. Eventually, they hope, they could even use this technology to cross the distance between stars. |
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| Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. The clean tubes is a nice idea, stasis with benefits. All the rest is stuff we could have managed from the 1960’s. Try looking up, G O Neill’s, Human Colonies in Space if you’re not already familiar with it. |
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| Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Wonkisphere Good to see that you are thinking through everything. It really helps the narrative to have everything 'joined up' and logical. Your book sounds a bit like Kim Stanley Robinsons Mars trilogy (Red/Green/Blue) - a near-future look at the the terraforming of Mars. Have you read them? What would you say that your unique angle on this subject will be? |
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| Farmer Duck | Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Hello wonk, The basic premise is something I'd enjoy reading. However, I think the clean tubes are quite a departure from keeping the science. This isn't a problem for me, as I love space opera, but if you're priding yourself on accuracy it doesn't really work. There's nothing you've described that seems to slow or arrest metabolism. The cancer sufferer's tumour will continue to grow while in stasis and travellers will continue to age. In my own opera-ish writing, I've a form of chemical stasis, using a chermical injected through the blood stream, in the CSF (fluid around the brain and spinal cord) and they're floating in it too. Theoretically, it preserves tissue (they're anaesthetised first). But, in general, good ideas. And I'm flabbergasted that Bill Stone would buy a one way ticket to the moon on what amounts to no more than an assumption that he'll get the materials to return. |
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| Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. That's true gung-ho spirit! I read somewhere that a NASA scientist stated that he'd volunteer for a one-way mission to Mars to operate a station in orbit about the planet (for it eventually to become his orbiting coffin, unless he decided to impact the planet afterwards), but I don't know if that's just overenthusisam for his study of the planet and bravado because there is no way that NASA or anyone else would contemplate such a mission. |
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| Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. I had this same thought. I wouldn't buy that ticket unless I knew a rescue ship was standing by. Perhaps an Apollo 13-like event on the way could force him to improvise. |
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| Registered User | Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Quote:
As far as not slowing metabolism, I'm not too sure why you'd say that. I can slow my metabolism today by changing what I eat, and I can track the difference. And I can speed it up by exercising. In this tube, I could be feeding them anything. Why could I not give them a combination of nutrients or drugs that would slow down their metabolism? I really have no idea why you don't think that could happen. They could be consuming just about any substance at that point. | |
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| Registered User | Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. I think your missing the point. There doesn't appear to be any other way to do it, now or in the near future. And an awful lot of the big discoveries on Earth were made by people taking similar risks. He isn't throwing caution to the wind for the heck of it. He wants to do it, because he wants to achieve the goal of enabling real space exploration again, taking us not only to the Moon will beyond it. That's why he'd take the risk. |
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| Registered User | Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Quote:
Right now I'm describing some of the science but it's not really what the book is about. The terraforming of Mars is what they want to do, but they never actually get there. Their first problem is that China is expanding into Space as well, and early in the book there is a massive accident where a Chinese ship impacts with a private ship, and it leads to a military conflict. More important then that, a series of ecological disasters have happened on Earth, and the population has slowly contaminated the water and food with toxins. The irony is that the water and food that they eat up in space was sent up twenty years earlier and they've been constantly cleaning it. So now the people in space have clean water and food. But the people on Earth do not. It's contaminated, and it's leading to riots and wars. | |
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| Registered User | Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Quote:
The astronauts who are talking about going on a trip to Mars believe that they would almost inevitable get cancer in the years afterward. And I saw one give an interview who passionately wanted to go despite that, and he would jump on board a ship tomorrow if he had the option. Going on one way suicide trip isn't that far from that. | |
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| Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Quote:
Oddly enough, from memory, I believe KSR's characters cure cancer as well. But on the surface of Mars. Can't remember how! | |
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| Farmer Duck | Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Quote:
I can see the rationale in putting someone into stasis to stop a tumour growing, but it would have to be true stasis, where every bodily process is stopped. Just slow it down and the tumour will keep taking resources at the expense of the body. Quote:
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| Registered User | Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Quote:
The correlation between what people eat and cancer is massive, and if I can limit the size of a tumor based on what someone eats now over a period of months, it seems reasonable that fifty years from now I could feed someone something that would remove the tumor. What your saying is in fact, contradicted by today's science. There is very strong evidence that what a person takes into their body is what causes a tumor to begin, nor not begin in the first place, and they've gotten pretty specific about what sort of substances those are. Right now, they give people advice on what to eat to deal with their already existing tumor. And right now people are doing research on what you can give someone to reduce a tumor. If I said we gave them drugs instead of nutrients, would you have shot at the idea then? Once again, the idea is that you are controlling every single thing that happens to the body when you put them in this tube, it's a clean room environment. What they eat, drink, breathe... anything they excrete can be measured. You could do a lot with that. One of things that makes experiments difficult these days is that they give someone a pill each day for ninety days, and he leaves. Different people have different reactions, and they need to figure out why. But it's hard to know all the different things those people did in ninety days. What they ate, where they went and so on. But if they were in a tube, you just eliminated all of those factors and you can study the process very objectively. Quote:
If I said we were giving them lots of chemicals instead of nutrients, would you think that made sense? Anyway... It's not stasis. I am specifically not doing that. I'm not suggesting that it truly makes them younger, but it improves regeneration and makes them seem younger, at least for awhile. Essentially, in it's current form it does not allow them to live forever, but it will allow them to slow it down a great deal. Eventually they will die anyway, but it will give them a lot more time for exploration. Last edited by wonkishere; 15th May 2012 at 07:10 PM. | ||
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| Registered User | Re: Some of the ideas for the book I'm working on. Quote:
They used it to help people go on long trips through space later on. | |
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"Cancer" will never be cured anyway, because cancer is not a single disease, it's a catch-all term for a host of diseases. | |
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