Breachspace Chronicles feat. Chrons authors!

[alchemist]

Originally Posted by Perpetual Man

I read the second story, Tainted Love last night and it was great, in some ways a rip roaring adventure, in others a near master-class in misdirection. I loved the perspective from which it was told, and the way you were made to feel sympathy for Kaysa and her plight all of which... well if I said any more I'd ruin the story.

The third is excellent too. So three out of three so far, good choices by Nuno.

The fourth I'll scan through but I think I know it already...

So next up Markus!

*gulp*

In truth, if I was writing it this year, I think it would be better.

[Mouse]

Originally Posted by Perpetual Man

I read the second story, Tainted Love last night and it was great, in some ways a rip roaring adventure, in others a near master-class in misdirection. I loved the perspective from which it was told, and the way you were made to feel sympathy for Kaysa and her plight all of which... well if I said any more I'd ruin the story.

Now you are too kind. I wrote that'n a long time ago now and am sure, like alc, that if I wrote it now it'd be better.

[Perpetual Man]

Just finished Markus, The Waking Man.

Really enjoyed it alc, felt it was fast-paced, very rich and a lot of fun.

[alchemist]

Thanks Perp! Although some of that richness was forced upon me.

But fun?! Huh?

[Perpetual Man]

Oh definitely.

I don't want to say too much in case someone else is going to read it , but I just loved so much of what you brought into it. It could have felt over full but you measured it just about perfectly.