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| General Writing Discussion For aspiring writers of science fiction and fantasy to discuss issues of writing. |
14th April 2012, 01:19 PM
| #46 (permalink) |
| Lagomorphing  | Re: double semi colons Being picky, one problem is that "he hadn't" and "he couldn't" aren't answers to the question of how he would cope. Only "he wouldn't" fits that. If you need to have "he couldn't" and "he hadn't" as well, they probably should go in a separate sentence. |
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