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Old 9th December 2011, 10:49 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Re: Synopsis - Mayhem

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So Qing is a hybrid assassin?
He's a half breed but it tends to be a dominant trait.
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Old 10th December 2011, 05:53 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Re: Synopsis - Mayhem

Is this an official synopsis? The sort you would submit to an agent or publisher? If so, I think you'll need to sum things up a littler quicker and neater; a lot of concepts and ideas are introduced one after another quite hastily, so perhaps it'd be best to simply outline the main story, rather than every plot-point. Of course, I'm no expert on synopses either, so this is merely an opinion.
The story itself, from what you've mentioned, does sound very interesting.
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