| Re: Dawn Dragon - the whole Prologue
Hi Mark,
Great stuff mate! Dragon stories per se have never really been my 'bag' but, needless to say, I'm a sucker for a rollicking ripping yarn!
What makes this so cool is how easily it scans;there's no snaggy. uncomfortable elements to your style, and that's a rare thing in the un-published writer - and many published authors I might add.
It's hard to comment on story-line inconsistencies from such a small segment, but I do appreciate your thinking in keeping the thing off the net. For my part, I'm posting what might be considered huge portions of stuff, but it's all relative and in fact what I have posted is a drop in the ocean considering the finished work will be a trilogy, and is mapping out to be a huge piece!
Anyway, I really like this from every perspective, style, content, you name it.
Keep it up Mark and hopefully we'll be seeing you on the bookshelves soon... |