[Mark Robson]

Originally Posted by erickad71

I'm hooked too, you big tease!

...and terribly jealous of dwndrgn too.

I'll need more than one proof reader, erika, but what I don't want to do is put too much on the web. It's an area that I've been lacking up until recently. I've got good proof readers for English language. What I really need is storyline critics, those who will question everything and point out inconsistencies in characterisation and plot. If you think you can do that, you're hired!