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| ...Prepare Thyself Join Date: Mar 2008
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| Re: OK Final vesrion 4 now! Quote:
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| | #63 (permalink) |
| Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008
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| Re: OK Final vesrion 4 now! Well I must have created something mildly interesting -- creating so much debate. I will take this opportunity to say; (a) At no point does the tale talk to any degree about distances and so on, just leaves that bit to your imagination. Someone rightly eluded to the Dr. Who, don't remember ever worrying how they got where they were going, just accepted it... (b) The novel concentrates on -- The problems we may be creating -- The emotional voyage -- a love triangle -- Where did we start here or... -- The religious undertones (incidentally, Noah’s ark is in Genesis, that covers more than one religion being in the old Testament) -- Forestation -- Spiritual vs. Material (2 nil it finished lol) -- A computer that has aspirations toward emotions -- A suicide -- SETI signals -- Overall it is a journey of thought and so you see my difficulty. 750 pages and barely time to make coffee! (c) When captain Constantine Adenbrook (as in heart hospital, Think about it) talks about speed, Jez says "that went straight over my head." And we only think we need a hyper drive, if we knew we would have gone by now, whose to say that when in open space, with no gravitational influences that, well we just do not have the remotest idea. Lets look at this way, say you wanted to drive to Newcastle from London and you had to go on 'B' roads, 6 days or 6 hours? and if you wanted to go to Mafiea1 which is just beyond Andromeda on 'B' roads, which is where we are currently in the scheme of things. If you think, how long ago was it that only birds flew! I remember a film about some kids going into space in a cardboard box. Overall I love the debate though, I have gotten so many ideas from you guys. keep it coming>>> Steve do I wear sunglasses, probably not, but I like the emote, and there we have it, subjective... |
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| | #64 (permalink) |
| Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008
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| Re: OK Final vesrion 4 now! Just a thought -- if you drive a 'Delorian' at 88 mph it is unlikley that it will go back in time' -- you may get a speeding ticket. The point is did any one care? Going by the £££ and $$$ the answer I suspect is no. Steve |
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| weaver of the unseen Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 669
| Re: OK Final vesrion 4 now! Well, you're right, but if that 'Delorian' would be equipped by a flux capacitor that eats to plutonium, which is needed to produce to 1.21 gigawatts to make the time machine work, then that would be totally another matter. There wouldn't be a car or a driver to give a speeding ticket. Just seeing it happening would make such a great story to tell to other people. Even better, if you would get a picture or video from it. Promise. The 'interwebs' would go mad. |
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| | #66 (permalink) |
| Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 54
| Re: OK Final vesrion 4 now! I found this interesting, Turkey City Lexicon Very much covers some points we have been debating::::
I want to fix a, 'flux capasitor,' to my keyboard. Someone earlier mentioned the 60's -- time travelling "pills." --?? The whole article is worth a read. Steve |
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