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Old 15th November 2008, 12:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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this is not working!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 16th November 2008, 03:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
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You're not kidding..... but I do like the sparcity of your words, the way you convey an empty space without needing to tell the readers everything, and the way we are forced to make up our own minds, giving us our own choices in what you mean.......
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Old 16th November 2008, 07:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I think you really meant to post this to the final lines thread.

Well it certainly got me hooked. I want to read more.
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Old 27th November 2008, 12:50 AM   #4 (permalink)
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no.. it was literal!!
my computer was not copying my story onto the page!!!!!!!!!!!
but if think it was that good.........
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Old 27th November 2008, 01:29 AM   #5 (permalink)
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making something out of nothing....


your doing it right!


apparently.
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Old 27th November 2008, 01:51 AM   #6 (permalink)
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no.. it was literal!!
my computer was not copying my story onto the page!!!!!!!!!!!
but if think it was that good.........
Open your story.
Open notepad.
Edit select all copy on your story
Past story into notepad
Edit select all copy from notepad
Paste onto site.

Or, let us know what app you are using so we can assist.
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