Can you sense the emotion here?

[TheEndIsNigh]

Too many Crowley's. Is he Mister, Nathan or just Crowley.

Price didn't sound realistic to me. Since she is now President I suspect she would need to be more composed. A man in the position of Crowley wouldn't get this level of interaction with the head honcho, certainly not simplistic descriptions of personal threats. She may well be present, observing. The actual interrogation would be done by someone more capable of inducing fear.

Cordelier Price turned and spoke to her secret service agents and the two Marines

And then they left. Ask yourself if this would really happen. The President has just been killed, this woman is now President. I suspect whatever she said she wouldn't be allowed to be totally alone in the same room with a free prisoner who is supposed responsible for all the mess. Especially if it was her intention to issue threats of an unpleasant nature.

I think you over compensated with the font size by the way.