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Old 31st July 2008, 08:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Alien Origins

Hey everybody. Let's try something here... make your own little origin to modern humanity via alien means. It doesnt have to be totally believable but just challenge your imagination...


Mine:

200,000 years ago the Grey aliens visited Earth from the Andromeda Galaxy on a research trip. They encountered early humanity (modern humans physicaly and mentally by now) in Africa, and took specimens up into their ship, and traveled back to Andromeda. Humanity in Andromeda flourished on a small world with very high gravity, but soon the Greys' Republic fell as civil war tore it apart.

100,000 years later, the Andromedan humans had evolved both mentally and physically to deal with the high gravity of their new homeworld, and to deal everyday with the brilliant Grey aliens. They're now a very closely related but superior sub-specias of H. sapiens. Let's call them the Adonai - the Lords.

The Adonai usurp the now extinct Grey aliens as the leaders of Andromeda. They begin retracing their former masters' travels through the Galaxy - and out of it - eventually stumbling upon Earth, H. sapiens sapiens still slowly moving up the ladder, so to say.

The Adonai influenced early H. sapiens' migration out of Africa between 80,000 and 60,000 years BCE. During this process, multiple early civilizations are founded - Eden and Atlantis at the forefront.

Humanity in Atlantis and Eden live freely among the Adonai (though the Adonai are not on Earth often or in great number, sticking to Andromeda mainly), they even mate, forming strong hybrids, more powerful than humans but not as powerful as the Adonai. The Edenites and Atlantenas are very advanced technologically, opening up trade routes with other primative civilizations and spreading their knowledge with civilizations such as the Greeks, Mayans and Egyptians, who morph their stories to meet their needs as a society over thousands of years of oral passing of the legends.

This scares the Adonai. The Adonai have grown to love their newfound power in Andromeda and dont want a similar race to challenge their power. At around 7,000 BC the Adonai end the Ice Age by melting the polar ice caps down. The sea level rises, flooding many lowland areas such as the region around the then-small Black Sea and English channel (which used to be dry land connecting England to France)... and Atlantis and Eden, destroying the advanced civilizations.

But the stories of these great islands and their founders and denizens would remain in humanity's minds, albeit changed a great deal.

Soon after this Great Flood, the Adonai were recalled to Andromeda where a great civil war was brewing. The Adonai would fall to civili war as the Greys had before them - but they left something behind. On Mars, an outpost of the Adonai remained, derelict and abandoned, but the humans would one day find it and learn the secrets of both the Greys and Adonai and travel to Andromeda to reclaim their rightful throne.

Would the humans suffer the same fate as the Adonai and Greys? That's up to us.
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Old 31st July 2008, 11:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Alien Origins

Sorry for the double, had to correct something. Forget about the flooding of the english channel in 7000 BC, that happened way before. But you know what I meant, glaciers melt and stuff floods
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