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Old 6th February 2005, 07:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I wrote this a few years ago.
Dont laugh.

Cry for me
I hate my life
so full of strife
I hate my mother
like no other
I hate my father
the evil master
I hate my personality
I hate myself for being ugly
But i cant cry
So cry for me
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Old 7th February 2005, 05:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Sorry man, but that sounds like Linkin Park lyrics...
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Old 12th February 2005, 05:16 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nope, all mine.
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