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pyan · 3rd April 2008, 11:45 AM

Well, I've had a good look, and we've had Backward Stories, and First Lines, but I can't find another thread on these lines....

What would be a final line, or (at the most) the two last lines of a story that would make you think: Wow, I wish someone would write that story!?

Culhwch · 3rd April 2008, 11:58 AM

...and they all lived happily ever after.

Okay, I'll give some serious thought to it.

pyan · 3rd April 2008, 12:52 PM

And I'm using:

"And it was all a dream....."

The Ace · 3rd April 2008, 01:17 PM

Sometimes, just sometimes, things work out the way they're supposed to.

BookStop · 3rd April 2008, 03:06 PM

As his blood pooled around him he realized he really did love that kid.

Talysia · 3rd April 2008, 04:35 PM

On reflection, he realised that getting sidetracked from his important journey had not been a waste of time.

Ursa major · 3rd April 2008, 04:49 PM

On reflection, he wished he'd saved his personality on mirrored disks.

Urlik · 3rd April 2008, 05:58 PM

Freed at last from his obligations, he realised his journey was just beginning.

chopper · 3rd April 2008, 06:51 PM

Everybody had lied to her. Now she knew the truth, she wished that was a lie too. But there was nobody left who could tell her that.
Somewhere far to the north, a storm was gathering.

To be continued. (naturally...)

Young stormlord · 3rd April 2008, 06:54 PM

And he walked away into new adventure, wiser and with more scabs then when he started this one.

Aes · 4th April 2008, 10:43 AM

It was then he realized what was going on; that wasn't chicken.

Grimblade · 4th April 2008, 05:15 PM

My name's Daniel and I think I'm going to die.

Oh, wait, I'M writing that right now.

Talysia · 5th April 2008, 12:21 PM

As he faced the man who would be his executioner, he couldn't help but wonder if it had been worth it after all.

Grimward · 5th April 2008, 12:26 PM

"Well, I'm back."

Culhwch · 5th April 2008, 01:09 PM

He grinned at his friend. 'Me?' he asked. 'I'm not sure. But there's a girl in Queensport I promised to call on again. I think I shall start there.'

3rd April 2008, 11:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Final lines.... Well, I've had a good look, and we've had Backward Stories, and First Lines, but I can't find another thread on these lines.... What would be a final line, or (at the most) the two last lines of a story that would make you think: Wow, I wish someone would write that story!?

3rd April 2008, 11:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
Culhwch Keep Moving Forward! Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Australia, Queensland Posts: 6,474 Blog Entries: 9	Re: Final lines.... ...and they all lived happily ever after. Okay, I'll give some serious thought to it.

3rd April 2008, 12:52 PM	#3 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Final lines.... And I'm using: "And it was all a dream....."

3rd April 2008, 01:17 PM	#4 (permalink)
The Ace Scottish Roman Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Perth and Kinross Posts: 3,811	Re: Final lines.... Sometimes, just sometimes, things work out the way they're supposed to.

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BookStop If you see a stranger... Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Missouri Posts: 2,405 Blog Entries: 6	Re: Final lines.... As his blood pooled around him he realized he really did love that kid.

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Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Final lines.... On reflection, he realised that getting sidetracked from his important journey had not been a waste of time.

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Ursa major Bearly Believable Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: UK: ENGLAND: Posts: 12,051	Re: Final lines.... On reflection, he wished he'd saved his personality on mirrored disks.

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Urlik Noise Warrior Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Isle of Wight Posts: 789	Re: Final lines.... Freed at last from his obligations, he realised his journey was just beginning.

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chopper fit & working again Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: South Yorkshire Posts: 1,829 Blog Entries: 74	Re: Final lines.... Everybody had lied to her. Now she knew the truth, she wished that was a lie too. But there was nobody left who could tell her that. Somewhere far to the north, a storm was gathering. To be continued. (naturally...)

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Young stormlord Thousand eyes and one! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Serbia and Montenegro Posts: 581 Blog Entries: 2	Re: Final lines.... And he walked away into new adventure, wiser and with more scabs then when he started this one.

4th April 2008, 10:43 AM	#11 (permalink)
Aes You Feel Fascinated Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 421	Re: Final lines.... It was then he realized what was going on; that wasn't chicken.

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Grimblade Struggling Writer Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Surrey Posts: 62	Re: Final lines.... My name's Daniel and I think I'm going to die. Oh, wait, I'M writing that right now.

5th April 2008, 12:21 PM	#13 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Final lines.... As he faced the man who would be his executioner, he couldn't help but wonder if it had been worth it after all.

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Grimward Where matter vanishes... Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Maryland Posts: 2,183	Re: Final lines.... "Well, I'm back."

5th April 2008, 01:09 PM	#15 (permalink)
Culhwch Keep Moving Forward! Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Australia, Queensland Posts: 6,474 Blog Entries: 9	Re: Final lines.... He grinned at his friend. 'Me?' he asked. 'I'm not sure. But there's a girl in Queensport I promised to call on again. I think I shall start there.'

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