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Old 26th June 2008, 11:35 PM   #106 (permalink)
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So that's it? he thought, closing the book.
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Old 27th June 2008, 12:49 PM   #107 (permalink)
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So that's it? he thought, closing the book.
I'm sooooo tempted to nick that one, Tal
(resist temptation, resist - resist)


The rain carried on falling, the world kept on turning. All in all ...

He smiled and took her hand in his as they walked through the wreckage together with hope renewed.
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Old 27th June 2008, 01:06 PM   #108 (permalink)
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I'm sooooo tempted to nick that one, Tal
(resist temptation, resist - resist)


The rain carried on falling, the world kept on turning. All in all ...

He smiled and took her hand in his as they walked through the wreckage together with hope renewed.


Wasn't that the end of a bond movie - the one with jaws


A few million years would pass, their sun would turn red and there would be no memory the planet ever existed.
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Old 27th June 2008, 02:21 PM   #109 (permalink)
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Damn it! Unconsciously nicked stuff too!! (Moonraker, I think the space station blew up, though )

Okay, try this instead ...

He smiled and took her hand in his as they walked through the garden together with hope renewed.

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Old 27th June 2008, 09:00 PM   #110 (permalink)
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"I'm glad that's all over," he said, folding his arms around her. She murmured her assent.
"Let's get out of here."
But as their ship set out from the harbour, sailing grandly into deeper waters, the engine suddenly exploded; the ship sunk and everyone died.



[Muahah...]
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Old 28th June 2008, 07:39 AM   #111 (permalink)
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I don't mind if you nick that one, Interference.


Brokenly, she watched as the sun went down, before she finally resumed her long exile.
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Old 28th June 2008, 11:51 AM   #112 (permalink)
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Re: Final lines....

They watched from afar as the flames engulfed the entire city; not one building escaped their fiery wrath.
"All those people...all those buildings...what could've caused it?" he said sadly, the fierce orange light dancing in his wide eyes.
"It's for the best," she said. She slipped the matches into her pocket and gently steered him away, leaving the burning city behind.
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Old 30th June 2008, 12:08 AM   #113 (permalink)
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Hoopy: Nice. Avatar seems appropriate too
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Old 30th June 2008, 12:56 AM   #114 (permalink)
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I also like that one.
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Old 30th June 2008, 06:24 PM   #115 (permalink)
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As she slowly turned around and looked at his face she realized that maybe he hadn't betrayed her.
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Old 30th June 2008, 07:43 PM   #116 (permalink)
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[*Bows* Thankee, thankee.]

"Thank god that's over," he said.
"Absolutely. Now I can finally get out of here. Bye."
He watched her retreating form with wide eyes. "But...after all we've been through...! You said you loved me!" he yelled.
Without pausing, without even looking back over her shoulder, she shrugged. "I lied."
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Old 30th June 2008, 08:51 PM   #117 (permalink)
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As she fell, and as the last of the great creatures faded into the darkness above, she knew she was in the soup. Turtles all the way down? The very phrase mocked her.
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Old 2nd July 2008, 01:22 PM   #118 (permalink)
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I really wish you'd point that rifle somewhere else.
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Old 8th July 2008, 11:12 PM   #119 (permalink)
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It wasn't enough that they had destroyed all of their instruments, in the midst of the smoke, the noise, and the rest of the melee, a timid looking little Tommy Smothers walked out on stage with a ukelele, when Pete came over and proceeded to grab it from a startled Tommy's hands, and began smashing it on the floor. The crowd cheered even more.
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Old 8th July 2008, 11:15 PM   #120 (permalink)
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he had finally figured it out:Birth was the end of things,not the beginning
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