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Old 20th February 2012, 10:20 AM   #361 (permalink)
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And then a whistling, much like the one that had haunted me for the past week, echoed throughout the house, filling every room with a chilling reminder of what was to come.

But I wasn't done yet.
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Old 25th February 2012, 06:30 PM   #362 (permalink)
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I wasn't exactly sure exactly what was supposed to happen now - so I just shook my hand, said goodbye to myself, and left me there, speechless. Perhaps I'll meet myself again sometime, farther down the road - but then again, maybe not.
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Old 26th February 2012, 04:07 PM   #363 (permalink)
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And that, Your Honor, is why we are here today. I beat that man to death with what he originally assaulted me with, so that is why the body smells like fish.
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Old 6th March 2012, 09:00 PM   #364 (permalink)
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I then climbed to the roof of my home and exclaimed, "I'll never use gasoline to start my grill again!"
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Old 14th March 2012, 04:47 AM   #365 (permalink)
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And so, that's what happened. I won't say that the long journey wasn't worth it, even though the thief just barely slipped my grasp, because I felt that all the things I experienced along the way taught me things about myself that I probably would have never otherwise learned. Whether or not those things are worth knowing, well, I don't know.


But I do hope that someday, I'll get my teeth back.
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Old 15th March 2012, 01:38 AM   #366 (permalink)
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Godzilla had left Japen again, my eyes scanned the wreckage of the city I was born in, I smiled. The great beast has given opportunities for more employment.
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Old 15th March 2012, 09:34 PM   #367 (permalink)
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Finally - FINALLY - everything was back to normal. Except for the extra leg sticking out of my back at a 59 degree angle. And that 59 degree angle was very important...
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Old 17th March 2012, 05:40 AM   #368 (permalink)
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After it all, all the blood, sweat & tears as martinis go, I'd had better.
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Old 17th March 2012, 05:48 PM   #369 (permalink)
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After I hacked up the last of the terrible triffid monsters with an ax, I went back to pruning my garden.
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Old 17th March 2012, 09:30 PM   #370 (permalink)
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Love John Wyndham!

And no matter what they told me, I still couldn't wrap my mind around the fact that I was dead.
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Old 21st March 2012, 09:33 PM   #371 (permalink)
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Love John Wyndham!
I've been of fan of the 1963 movie since I was a kid. Great monster movie.

I was relieved after the verdict was spoken, "Not guilty". The media had a field day talking my ten year imprisonment on false charges that the Easter Bunny's half human child was mine.

Twelve million dollars was awarded to me, and I went back to livng peacefully on Easter Island.
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Old 16th April 2012, 01:45 AM   #372 (permalink)
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Together, heaven shines all around us.
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Old 24th April 2012, 07:12 PM   #373 (permalink)
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I watch you sleep and I know I am blessed. No remorse, no fear, everything is whole again. Thank you my love.
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Old 24th April 2012, 09:20 PM   #374 (permalink)
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And that my younglings is why you shouldn't run with a drawn sword!
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Old 24th April 2012, 11:11 PM   #375 (permalink)
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I crested the hill to see the sun setting in the horizon. Smoke rose in the distance in most directions. I was sure that I was seeing mankinds last sunset. As the sun disappeared in its entirety, I lit a candle in the pale moon. Hoping it would be enough to light my way; tonight and forever I started to walk.
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