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| Moderator Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Hampshire
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| Trouble with passing time... I read The Belgariad years ago, and remember it as being a pretty average-to-good fantasy series....just picked up a 2-volume set of The Mallorean, and having a bit of trouble with it: specifically, the habit DE has of taking four pages to describe in detail (say) how the party set up camp for the night,what they eat, how they cook it, etc; then the next paragraph starts off something like "Several days later"... Is it just me, or does anyone else find this a bit, well, disconcerting? It's a bit like pushing FF every five minutes when you're watching a DVD... |
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| Smile people are watching Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: New Zealand (Aotorea)
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| Re: Trouble with passing time... I never had a problem personally with the time changes in his books (But I know others do) but then I don't read all the details personally (I tend to skim read those parts) |
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| Young Trainee Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Bristol
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| Re: Trouble with passing time... I don't have a problem, but I do get a bit confused as to how old Garion, Ce'Nedra and Eriond are. I think in the mallorean Garion is about 28 and Ce'Nedra about 26, then for the most part Eriond is about 14. Am I right? |
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| Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire
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| Re: Trouble with passing time... At first, it didn't bother me, as the Belgariad/Malloreon were amongst the first fantasy books I read, but the last time I reread them, I definitely noticed that the story seemed a bit choppy for it. And Eriond's age was something I wasn't really too sure about, either. |
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| Registered User Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Colorado
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| Re: Trouble with passing time... well, time is usually choppy, subjectively speaking. if all that happened were a few days of travelling, with the identical routine then yeah, hitting ff, for a few minutes to get past the 20 minute scene of people riding horses down a road would be justified. I dunno if I'd want three chapters on an uneventful ride across the countryside.... no matter how painstakingly detailed the story might be. |
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| Auditor of Reality Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: North East Lincolnshire
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| Re: Trouble with passing time... I must admit that the layout of the stories and books in this manner seems to be confusing. In Belgarath the Sorcerer, Eddings demolishes centuries between two lines, in the trend continues. It's all to do with the layout - he needs to put a blank line between these temporal gaps, rather than just a new paragraph on a new line. |
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| Scottish Roman Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Perth and Kinross
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| Re: Trouble with passing time... I suppose he's just trying to tell the story, striking a balance between giving information and skipping the boring bits, a difficult balance to achieve. By the way, Garion and Ce'nedra are the same age, Garion's sixteenth birthday (Erastide) coming only a short time before Ce'nedra presented herself in the throne room in accordance with the Accords of Vo Mimbre. Errand seems to be a toddler when he first appears and seems to grow up normally, but who can tell ? |
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| Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Australia
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| Re: Trouble with passing time... it seems to me that from Pawn of Prophecy to the end of Seeress of Kell is about 12 years. We start out with Garion at 14. By Queen of Sorcery he's 15. In castle of wizardry he turns 16 (as does Ce'Nedra). From the end of Enchanters End Game to the beginning of Guardians of the West is about 8 years making Garion roughly 24/25. It would stand to reason that the quest across Mallorea would have taken roughly 2 years...the time it took for Geran to become a 2 year old... So unless my maths are faulty thats roughly 12 years. Eriond first appears to Zedar as a toddler of about 2. During the events of the Belgariad, he is referred to as appearing around 6. this fits with him being 14-ish once the malloreon adventures begin (him being the focus of this quest and being 14 at the beginning, and Garion being the same when his journeys began - part of the continual repetitions that Garion mentions in Tol Honeth perhaps... or Eddings meddling?). |
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| Scottish Roman Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Perth and Kinross
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| Re: Trouble with passing time... There is also the fact that Eriond, "Started to move around the world," when Garion was born. As a god, in potentia, Eriond remained a toddler until he was required to be something more, I suppose. He certainly had no difficulty in overcoming Ce'Nedra's resistance to going to Riva (something Polgara singularly failed to do). |
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