HELP WITH PLOT and things.

[anthorn]

I am stuck with my current plot project. So would people be so kind as to hellp? Its mostly in an outline stage at this moment. Okay I'll start.

1. I have the story for Faircaira and Garrison and Faelii and Sorrel and how they come together plus the hows and whys,

2. My main concern is Anthorn and Nikita who are the two other main characters. They start off in Mana city. They're thieves, well one of them is anyways, Nikita is really a singer. One day they get caught running a scam and are given a choice. Go with Gol, to Mazure Island the Abandoned Isle to look for a crystal. Or be handed into the authorities. Anthorn and Nikita decide to go (having wanted to leave for some time) with him.

After a travel through the continent to the coast they take an Airship to the isle. But that crashes and they survive-barely they then go to Lancifer an abandoned towerand search for the crystal. They find odd things. A stud book for people and a crib and a family portrait, amongst others.

Eventually they find the crystal but it's been shattered. So it was all for nothing. As they then try to leave the fortress/tower they're waylaid by Lycrots, creatures made from wolf and human dead. Anthorn sacrifices himself to save them all by locking himself in the room with the beasts. And the others will presume him dead.

But my problem is what next for Nikita? How do i get her away from Gol back across the sea to the continent and together with Faircaira and company to be part of the main plot.

i mean going on at this verymoment there is a rebellion happening and Faircaira is at its centre, she's pregnant with a child which may be the destroyer of worlds and so the Council want her dead. And with that she has two seperate resistance groups who want her to be their figure head. I need to get Nikita some how into Faircairas camp to merge the threads but i dont know how..............
Any advice appreaciated

[anthorn]

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[The Curious Orange]

My friend, only you can answer this. It's your story.

The only piece of advice I can give is this - What would Nikita do?