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| Dragon Writer Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Northamptonshire
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| City of Stars Just finished City of Stars last night. It's taken me a while as I've been a bit too distracted by other things to read much recently. Again, Mary, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. You seem to have added Greek mythology into the mix as well, which makes the story seem even more cosmopolitan. I was at the British Museum a couple of times over the summer researching for the Codex show and I spent quite some time looking at the Etruscan pottery. Whilst I found the section fascinating, I don't remember seeing the flying horses on the pottery. I don't doubt for one second that they're there, as I am sure you did your homework on this, but it was news to me that the flying horse myth was anything other than Greek. Out of interest, how did you visualise Georgia's little flying horse ending up on her step brother's bed in the epilogue? Did he leave it there for her? I wondered at first whether Rodolfo had taken it as punishment for her defiance, but then realised that this was not the case. Then I wondered if its disappearance was something to do with the sudden mismatch of timescales between Talia and London. In the end, however, I came to the conclusion that Russell must have left it there as some sort of token of reconciliation. |
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| Writer Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Oxfordshire
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In answer to your question, Russell HAD stolen the horse a second time and kept it for over a year. When he left for university, he realised how childish he was being and left it on his bed - knowing that Georgia would go into his room if the door was open - as a sort of peace offering. Of course, since he never knew what she used it for, he didn't realise just how much its loss had hurt but I doubt he would have cared. He wanted to hurt her; at least he didn't crush it. Mary | |
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| Dragon Writer Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Northamptonshire
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| Re: City of Stars I was sort of assuming that the Etruscan winged horses were derived from the legend of Pegasus, born of the blood of Medusa - hence the Greek influence. If this is not the case, and their legends have sprung up separately, then I stand corrected. My ancient history knowledge is not strong enough for me to be confident on that one. |
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| Re: City of Stars I think it's a quite separate tradition because the horses are shown multiply - pulling carriages etc. - therefore not as a named phenomenon like Pegasus. They son't seem to feature in any stories but that might be because not much Estruscan literature has survived. Mary |
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| Dragon Writer Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Northamptonshire
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| Re: City of Stars Most interesting, Mary. I might just read around the subject a little next time I get a take a break from my mad push for world domination! (Which might be some time. )I got the sense from the writing that you have ridden horses, but have never really been in with the horsey crowd. The detail which is very much a trademark of the work I've read of yours so far held up very well. I found your descriptions of the riding elements to be technically very good, but always had the feeling that something was missing. Then it struck me. Maybe it was deliberate on your part to avoid it, but having had two sisters who were mad about horses in their youth, I realised there was something missing from Georgia's language - the use of horse riding jargon. For someone whose passion was horses, she didn't seem to use a lot of the terms and phrases that I remember filling conversations in our household when I was younger. Please don't take it as a criticism, more an observation. It didn't detract from the story at all, which I enjoyed even more than the first. |
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| Writer Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Oxfordshire
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| Re: City of Stars Yes, I did ride as a young teenager though I was never very good at it. The "where's the horse?" comment was of course from life. I avoided "horsey jargon" because I didn't want this to be a "horsey book" like the Pullein Thompsons and there is enough jargon around the Stellata/Palio without adding more. Mary |
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| Dragon Writer Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Northamptonshire
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| Writer Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Oxfordshire
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I always thought that if I had a country mansion I should call it - the way retired judges call theirs "Truncheons" or whatever - Tottering Heaps, which is good description of my system. Mary Last edited by Mary Hoffman; 18th January 2008 at 05:14 PM. Reason: typo | |
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| Yeah, the really me! Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: SOUTH AMERICA
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| Re: City of Stars I'm in chapter 21. I found Georgia as a Stravaganti most interesting than Luciano, and I really like the way Remora works, with all that divisions and haaate! But I missed Rodolfo =( |
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| Writer Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Oxfordshire
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It's being re-vamped in time for the re-launch in July but I think all the old stuff is still accessible. Mary | |
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