Winged Humans

[Flag Pole Sitta]

Hi! This is my first post on this forum, so a shout out to y'all! And secondly, I'm sorry if this has already been discussed, but I couldn't find any threads about this topic.

So the basic idea is that I'm writing a story where one of the main characters is a winged humanoid and I'm wondering about the practicalities of this. First and foremost he would need some insanely large wings, I'm thinking a 12 foot wing span (about 3.5 meters). The next major issue I came across were shirts. He couldn't just wear a shirt with holes in the back, they'd never fit over his wings. I thought maybe something that buttoned at the neck and along the side. The front would be one piece, and then he'd wrap it around and it would end up being a tank top, and if he wanted sleeves he could button them on. Can you guys visualize what I'm talking about? What are your thoughts on this matter?
I really appreciate any ideas you may have.

[quidscribis]

How similar is his physiology to humans? Birds have hollow bones, making them much lighter. Would he have something like this? Or would he have bones closer to humans? It will affect wing size dramatically.

[Giovanna Clairval]

Quidscribis has it right about the hollow bones, but I'm wondering about the wings.

Shouldn't the span of the wings be much more wider? Spread wings should be 30 feet at least, or am I wrong?
It's enormous.

More?

Tinker Bell's dust works very well .

[Flag Pole Sitta]

I am having his bones be hallow, because a 30 foot wing span is just ridiculously wide, he'd never be able to be inside. Though I think hallow bones wouldn't make that much of a difference, the logistics of winged humans are just ridiculously impossible. Like what about his legs, they'd just be massive dead weight while he's flying, they'd probably interfere with his aerodynamics. But that’s the joy of fantasy. "Its magic" is a valid argument.

[Flag Pole Sitta]

I was thinking more about the shirt thing (no one seems to care much but I like to pontificate) and I have come up with something better, the shirt would be a regular front buttons shirt with sleeves and everything in the front, then in the back there would be holes for the wings, then there would be a cut in the fabric from the wing hole to the neck so that when the shirt was put on a flap of fabric would fall open in the back. Then there would be buttons to fasten the flap into place at the neck and wing holes.
But of course the problem is, how do you fit the complicate shirt smoothly into the narrative?

And then, how would he hold his wings at rest? Unless he's depressed or tired he'd probably hold them off the ground, but how close to his body could he realistically hold his wings?

Ah, me, I'll go crazy keeping track of the details... that pixie dust looks pretty good...

[Giovanna Clairval]

John Varley, who is a physicist, described winged humans with great precision in the series Titan (book 3, I think).
They are tiny, about fifty-centimetre tall (!) and have eight-metre-long wings (each wing, now you see the span).

You could reduce the size of everything in your world.

The only way of wearing a shirt when you've got wings is to tightly fold your wings against your back.
Each time that you fly, you strip!

Or else the sheer strength of the unfolding wings tears the shirt apart, which would be inconvenient... but dramatic.

I hope this helps you.

[Culhwch]

I think as long as it's roughly believable, you can get away from deadly accuracy. It all come down to whether your prose sells the idea or not. If someone wants to believe in winged humans, they will. If someone else stops and says, 'Well, this is preposterous!', well, too bad. All you can do is hope that they've already bought the book and lost the reciept....

[Giovanna Clairval]

Originally Posted by Culhwch

I think as long as it's roughly believable, you can get away from deadly accuracy. It all come down to whether your prose sells the idea or not. If someone wants to believe in winged humans, they will.

You are right!

I was just being pedantic.

I've seen a series of drawings about pedants in the gallery section (about page 150-160). Hilarious!

[Flag Pole Sitta]

Originally Posted by Giovanna Clairval

John Varley, who is a physicist, described winged humans with great precision in the series Titan (book 3, I think).
They are tiny, about fifty-centimetre tall (!) and have eight-metre-long wings (each wing, now you see the span).

You could reduce the size of everything in your world.

That seems really weird to me, there are some lare hawks that are about that height, arn't there? And no bird has a wing span that massive.

Originally Posted by Giovanna Clairval

The only way of wearing a shirt when you've got wings is to tightly fold your wings against your back.
Each time that you fly, you strip!

Or else the sheer strength of the unfolding wings tears the shirt apart, which would be inconvenient... but dramatic.

I hope this helps you.

If there were wing holes it should work out, right? It's so cheap to have an attractive male character wander around shirtless...

[gully_foyle]

The appropriate wingspan question has been discussed before, see http://www.chronicles-network.com/fo...f-a-human.html.

The question of shirts, well, that's a new one. Are we talking business shirts here? You would probably opt for something that goes on backwards, like the type HardScienceFan wears (just joking Ben) so you just put your arms in and tie it up at the back. Otherwise something skimpy and in leather. If you've got wings I doubt you need to dress business/casual.

[Giovanna Clairval]

Hey! I suggested Tinker Bell's dust in the first place!

I haven't read that thread yet, thanks, Gully-Foyle.

The problem with flying humans is the weight of bones, a relatively huge head (plus a large body) and other useless, unbalancing things like those legs, which you, Flag, already noticed.

Titan is a very good, goofy-but-serious SF trilogy. Varley is an obsessive guy, besides being very funny. Since he's a scientist, he must have reflected hard on the problem, given the amount of details. I haven't made the calculations, so I can't vouch for their accuracy.

The problem with wearing a shirt (even an open one) lies in the size of dorsal muscles, which make a bulge and must (I read somewhere) tie themselves low and go down to the waist, forming like a girdle with other muscles.

Steph Swainston, in The Year of Our War, writes about a chap who is the only flying person in his world (the others have vestigial wings). There are just hints of his clothes, if memory serves, but of course it's written in the first person, which helps.
Still, even in the third person, you don't have to describe shirts!

And yes, the idea of handsome shirtless guys appeals to me, Flag Pole!

[Flag Pole Sitta]

Thanks so much, you guys gave me a bunch of things to think about, and I'd love to keep talking, but I have to go to bed. Really. I have to go to class in four hours. V.V

[lin robinson]

It's totally impracticle scientifically, so you're better off just doing it.
I recently read "Maximum Ride" in which mutant kids have wings...that fold up so they can wear clothes without anybody noticing it, no less.
Preposterous. Do readers care? Why should they?

[Sapheron]

Well, if you read that other thread I started, you'll find that the basic idea is that:

Scientifically, humans would be very different if they wanted to fly. A massive wingspan, smaller legs and head, lighter and/or hollow bones, and huge amounts of extra muscle and bone protrusions in the torso. It wouldn't really be a 'human' any more, it'd just be too different.

From the story teller's point of view, give them about two metre long wings and hope no one goes into it too deeply.

At least, that's the answer I got to. Most probably, yours will be different.

Finally, if you're going to sleep four hours before you turn up in class you aren't sleeping enough. To write properly you need to sleep enough. Bear it in mind.

[kythe]

I doubt most readers really worry about this level of detail, but this has been an interesting discussion to read.

Have you considered giving your character more than one set of wings? Dragonflies have long skinny bodies and two sets of wings. Because the lower body of a human is so heavy, it probably would need a set of wings for balance and support. I'm not sure how to fit that in, physiologically, especially if you want your person to wear clothes.

What about small wings that flutter quickly, like bees? Would it be possible to lift a human off the ground? Several sets of small wings may be more practical than one set of big wings, especially for hiding them under clothes.