| |
|
| |||||||
| Critiques Post your writing here for critique and constructive criticism |
![]() |
| | Thread Tools | Rate Thread |
| | #1 (permalink) |
| Chosen of Azathoth Join Date: May 2007 Location: New York
Posts: 38
| A poem Here is a poem I constructed in a good ten minutes. Tell me if it's any good. It glides across the sullen sky, alone, unknowing of its destination, simply flying and it weeps accordingly, for it has sown its reckoning and damnation on its own. Nothing and nobody shall ever be able to comprehend its lonely cry, the ways its inflection of voice decree its melancholic sadness in an azure sky. Forever and ever does it roam, starved of love and affection. Never to regain a place back home, where it might find guidance and direction. Never will it know the peace inherent of death, for it will always remain, festering like a sore and in pain it will ache and forever give breath to the loneliness, to the depths of its very core. It glides across the sullen sky, alone, unknowing of its destination, simply flying and it weeps accordingly, for it has sown its reckoning and damnation on its own. |
| | |
![]() |
| Thread Tools | |
| Rate This Thread | |
| |
Similar Threads | ||||
| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| Looking for Science Fiction Poem | jahnbuck | Book Search | 6 | 1st September 2006 09:50 PM |
| Poem: Go Bravely Into That... | terryweide | Critiques | 6 | 9th September 2005 11:39 PM |
| To Helena and the Revolution (a poem(?)) | Thadlerian | Critiques | 2 | 30th August 2005 07:24 AM |
| POEM: Poem By Us | shandril | Critiques | 4 | 20th August 2005 03:34 PM |
| A Christmas Poem | imported_Data | The Lounge | 2 | 18th December 2002 02:53 AM |
|
| About | Link To Us | For Writers | For Publishers | Privacy | Terms of Use | Copyright | Press | XML/RSS | Contact Us © Copyright Science Fiction Fantasy Chronicles 2003-2008 |