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[mirinda]

well it was entertaining I'll give it that....puhlease I am such a deep thinker uhu riiiigght.

[HardScienceFan]

i write SF Mirinda,not fantasy it reads differently
Kilodalton is a weight unit used in amino biochemistry

[mirinda]

I lik good stories period. SF, fantasy, whatever, good story, I like it.

Wow it amazes me what I learn on the chrons. Seriously if were't for you all explaining things to me I'd feel so bored. I love how you all teach me something new everyday.

[anomanderis]

It seems you have a pretty wild imagination, hsf .
what would be really cool was if Amanda actually fit into the storyline you did in the beginning. Though, yes, I know, these are only snippets that you have thought of and not a story, per se .
I do those too. Just random lines of dialogue flit through my mind.

[HardScienceFan]

Manik Chandraborthy walked down the streets of the city,sweat beading his brow,trickling into his eyes,giving everything around him distorted outlines and multicoloured haloes.


Which city?
Does it matter?
Holadverts,tricycles,the manycoloured garbed crowds on the sidewalk,the foodstalls: all cities looked the same.
He handled the gun in his pockets.
The gun was going to bring in some money.
At last..
He picked a nice,unbelievably crowded spot,near a 200 kcal/meal protein dispenser.
The gun in his tunic pocket felt heavy,but not uncomfortably so.
He had chosen a reasonably ancient projectile weapon because it made an incredible loud sound when it functioned as desired.
He took it out and aimed it at his temple,just for practice.

Most of the people around him looked unbelievably disgusted,but some of them smiled.

‘Very poor taste to do that ,when everybody around you is dressed in spanking new clothes.Blood is hard to wash off’.
‘Wow,a suicider.Probably too lazy too work’

Their eyes spoke louder than words..
A Mortal committing suicide,just so his kids could eat?
Ok,but don’t do it in an Immortal part of the city,please.
Manik aimed the Revolver(for it was thus the weapon was called)at an amused Immortal..

He could see the man appreciated the joke.
He could practically read the man’s mind:
*****always funny,those Mortals.
Their short ,120- year lives make for a curious sense of humour.***

He tried to pull the trigger,but a Crisium Real Estate Advertisement robot had approached rapidly and thrown a forcefield.

“Not here sir” it intoned,’property values might drop because of one desperate act ’

He tried to reason with the inanimate object.

“you don’t understand’,he shouted hoarsely at it,’they will pay my children 400 BFD for the broadcast rights’

[Nesacat]

You put a wicked spin on things Ben. It's harshgood reading. thank you.