Who Murdered Frederick Layer

[Mark Robson]

Hello, Joose. Welcome to Chronicles. I'll leave this thread here for now - I see you've made a duplicate thread into the critiques section. I'm not quite sure why you've posted it in this section. Did you specifically want me to critique it? Have I met you recently at a school, or a bookshop? If so, it would be good if you could post me a reminder as to who you are - that way I can work out roughly what sort of response you're looking for.

I hope you stick around and enjoy what Chronicles has to offer. It's a great site for anyone who likes SFF. I hope to see you back here soon.

[Joose]

I'm the boy who wrote ROMBAS the gangster novel.

[Mark Robson]

Ah! Now I understand. If you want me to look through stories, it would be better to email them to me. I sometimes miss things for quite some time here at Chronicles, particularly if they are posted in the Critiques section, as I don't always check in there. However, I always make a point of trying to answer my emails, so you stand a far better chance of getting a response there. Good to see you here, though. I hope you enjoy exploring Chronicles. There's plenty of fun little niches to find.