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Old 26th May 2007, 03:25 AM   #121 (permalink)
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Angel leaned in close, his breath skimming my ear, sending involuntary shivers of delight over my goose-pimpled flesh, and whispered, "Goodbye."
actually this would be an amazing cliff-hanger
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Old 27th May 2007, 10:04 PM   #122 (permalink)
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After I'd discovered them I began to wonder if anyone remmembered the meaning of the word dissatisfied.
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Old 30th May 2007, 11:52 AM   #123 (permalink)
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I saw the end of the world.
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Old 30th May 2007, 12:07 PM   #124 (permalink)
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Most of B. M.'s days consisted of eating, drooling over musicians with disturbingly greasy hair and planning an escape from what The Outsiders (she always pictured it with a capital letter, knowing they could never understand what was really happening there) called a mental institution.
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Sylvio woke up because the light was different in his room.
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Old 10th July 2007, 11:46 AM   #126 (permalink)
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The last words I heard before the bomb hit were, I miss you, George; the phone line went dead, and the earth shook.
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Old 10th July 2007, 11:10 PM   #127 (permalink)
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The stench of ash and death poisoned the air.
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Old 11th July 2007, 08:02 AM   #128 (permalink)
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The village rose up from the desert like gooseflesh on bare skin.
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Old 11th July 2007, 08:21 AM   #129 (permalink)
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The grey shadow of a man holding a long knife was cast onto the wall in front of me, although I knew that I was the only one in the room.
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Old 11th July 2007, 09:27 PM   #130 (permalink)
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I felt the agonizing pain in my head, tasted the blood then saw him standing over me with his blade drawn. Coming for his prey. Tonight I was his chosen victim.
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Old 11th July 2007, 11:32 PM   #131 (permalink)
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Gryndel staggered to his feet, scrapping earth and leaf litter from his cloak as he did so, before sparing a moment to gaze regretfully at the carcass of the horse that had borne him so well for over 100 leagues in his desperate flight from Tal and the Emperor's hunters.
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Old 12th July 2007, 12:01 AM   #132 (permalink)
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Sputtering and choking as I went back beneath the surface of the water. It filled my lungs. Fighting I came back up. But the hand of death, and my captor was ruthless that night. That warm summer night in August, the day I died.
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I feel sad now.I see my creator reaching for the "off" switch
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Old 12th July 2007, 12:19 AM   #134 (permalink)
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Thrusting my sword into his stomach I felt it bounce of of his ribs. Pulling it free i wiped it clean smiling as he fell to the muddy ground. The blood grew as the life drained out of him. My counterpart shivered. "He deserved it." I said plainly. "Now come on girl."
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Would I trully live again if I possesed this man or would that life yet cling to his shell, the differences between his past and future conduct attributed to some odd defect of his personality?
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