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Old 2nd July 2010, 04:37 PM   #706 (permalink)
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I knew I was going to die today, but I was a little disappointed it was going to be like this.
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Old 2nd July 2010, 06:39 PM   #707 (permalink)
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I like that, Langadune! Do you have a harley?


Killing him seemed like a good way of avoiding my responsibility for his upbringing.
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Old 2nd July 2010, 06:46 PM   #708 (permalink)
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More good ones! And thanks, Interference.

This is is maybe not quite as interesting but:

Grandfather Oak let the pores in his leaves open, searching for signs of his offspring.
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Old 2nd July 2010, 06:48 PM   #709 (permalink)
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Once upon a time, twice upon a time, many times and many settings, the eternal, unwinnable combat between good and evil, and the competing forces defining those words, came to a head; and the Heralds totted up the butchers’ bill.
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Old 2nd July 2010, 07:07 PM   #710 (permalink)
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I like that, Langadune! Do you have a harley?
Thanks!

I do have a Harley. It's a 2002 Fatboy.
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Old 2nd July 2010, 07:13 PM   #711 (permalink)
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Grandfather Oak let the pores in his leaves open, searching for signs of his offspring.
Nope, I'd say you got another "interesting" one there all right


I suppose I knew it all along and, looking back, it was obvious he'd been behind me the whole time.
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Old 3rd July 2010, 05:39 AM   #712 (permalink)
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One winter's night I saw a face in a tree.
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Old 3rd July 2010, 05:47 AM   #713 (permalink)
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There's a revolution in my head, making me the most wanted man alive.
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Old 3rd July 2010, 12:07 PM   #714 (permalink)
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It all started when I opened that email, something I now wish I'd never done.
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Old 3rd July 2010, 03:48 PM   #715 (permalink)
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It's only called paranoia when it's unfounded.

No food since April. The water had run out soon after that. None of us could think of a single reason why we were all still alive.

And still the Doc was smiling as if she'd been keeping something from us. Damn. Now it was happening to me, too. Suspicion and mistrust. Paranoia.

Isn't it only called paranoia when it's unfounded?
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Old 3rd July 2010, 04:21 PM   #716 (permalink)
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"Hi, Uncle Joe !" Sue's voice held a bright, breezy note which meant she had another problem, and was about to make it mine...

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It all began with another 'local difficulty' in Central Africa.

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I've joked my clients came in every shape and form, but a bespoke DV-ROM was something new.

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With thirty degrees axial tilt, and 10 Bar plus three hundred degrees of dirty carbon dioxide, 'Nova was indeed a nice place.
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Old 4th July 2010, 02:00 AM   #717 (permalink)
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Here's one that I started a story with many years ago, which I just found again recently--the title was "Dear Gwen":


I have to hurry--I don't know how much time I have left. If that mirror is right, I'm going to die before tomorrow morning. It's been right so far.
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Old 4th July 2010, 03:08 AM   #718 (permalink)
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(Definitely wanna know more )

"I really ought to turn over a new leaf," he said, picking his teeth with the Bowie knife that had been stuck in the messenger's back a few minutes earlier.

"We should turn over this page-boy first," I suggested.
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Old 4th July 2010, 03:14 AM   #719 (permalink)
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Amanda wheezed as Doctor Landry tightened his fingers around her throat. Gray sideburns framed empty eyes and froth formed at the corners of his mouth. Laughter filled her ears, coming from the cameraman by the window and the maniac on the television screen.
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Old 8th July 2010, 11:26 PM   #720 (permalink)
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As a person moves through this world, they carry with them the thread of fate which binds them to all other things. To be but a single strand is lonely and frightening; many simply resign themselves to following the weave of others. But there are threads among the meek who refuse to conform to the grain. They are the ones who will shape the world in which we live, the ones who will bring about times of peace or times of ceaseless bloodshed, the ones who will decide the fate of thousands. They must be learned from. They must be watched.
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